英语作文一篇,麻烦帮忙修改~!(语法,通顺,择辞,优美,逻辑)

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THIS IS ME
Hello every,I'm Ekaterina.
I study in 成都七中育才学道分校.My favorite subject is music,I do well in singing and dancing. I believe that music can make people pure,so I want to be a musician when I grow up.There are no borders for music in the world,but if you want to sing to other nations,you should use their languages in songs.When I understand that,I konw the import of learning Enlish.Fortunately,my parents let me learn English when I was a little girl.There are nothing easy in the world,and there are nothing boring in the world.Now,I can speak Enlish well,and also like English very much.
That's all,thank you.

改的越好,加分越多!

THIS IS ME
Hello every,I'm Ekaterina.
I study in(at) 成都七中育才学道分校.My favorite subject is music,I do well in singing and dancing. I believe that music can make people pure,so I want to be a musician when I grow up.There are no borders for music in the world,but if you want to sing to other nations,you should use their languages in songs.When I understand that,I konw the import of learning Enlish.Fortunately,my parents let me learn English when I was a little girl.There are nothing easy in the world,and there are nothing boring in the world.Now,I can speak Enlish well,and also like English very much.
That's all,thank you.
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