以I love winter为题，写短文（英语）

I Love Winter
I love winter very much,because of its white,its beauty,even because it make me very comfortable.In winter,you can see the snow here and there.You may have a snowball fight with your friends,or you may also make a snowman to share the happiness in winter.
So I really love winter,it can bring me a lot of fun.

这个可以吗？六十几个词。

祝你学习进步，加油哦~~

Crimson rain flip-flops on my tiny world,
I, a lonesome sparrow, long to taste spring's joy.
Twilight, a fiery flame, dimming, slowly,
The monotonous crescendo of the sea rocks my aveoli.
My arteries and veins mourn like sad nightingales,
My heart whispers its grief to the young moon;
Each heartbeat, a musical note, becoming less audible
As the auburn sky swallows my winding neurones.
I am, slowly, mesmerized, seeing the Earth wane.

你看这个行么 以前写的了

Crimson rain flip-flops on my tiny world,
I, a lonesome sparrow, long to taste spri