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Shiyi Yang
Dr. Jill MacLachlan
English 1130-012
January 18, 2009
Summary of Deborah Tannen’s “TV’s War of World”
In “TV’s War of World”, Deborah Tannen points out that due to the “argument culture” which means that the same as agreement, arguments are necessary for people to solve the problems and understand the information, the “television debate programs” have appeared; however, this kind of programs now is far away from its original aim and exists some defects (212). To begin with, Tannen argues that current “television debate programs” couldn’t help people think over the issue deeply and dialectically since the debate’s purpose which is to win makes the issue have only one obvious conclusion and doesn’t allow both sides to exist at the same time (213). Then, Tannen notes that instead of discussing one issue deeply, a debate show is always divided into some parts to report several issues rather than analyze them (213). In addition, Tannen states
Summary of Deborah Tannen’s “TV’s War of World”[去掉引号,用斜体,下同]
In “TV’s War of World”, Deborah Tannen points out that due to the[the删掉]“argument culture” which means that the same as agreement, arguments are necessary for people to solve the[the删掉] problems and understand the information[understand不带这么用的，换成help communications或者remove misunderstandings之类的吧], [这句从句结构有问题，建议改成 where arguments are necessary.....just like fuctions of agreements] the [the删掉]“television debate programs” have appeared[用spring up涌现，没有必要用完成时]; [用句号吧，英文中分号其实用的不多的，一般法条中12345的列举才比较多用]however[如果用句号就大写], this kind of programs now is far away [away去掉，far away from习惯用语时间距离上的远离，要强调的话far前面加much]from its original aim[用purpose，intent比较好，不过后面看到有用purpose，避免重复，这里用intent比较好] and exists some defects (212). To begin with, Tannen argues that current “television debate programs” couldn’t[can not就可以了] help people think over the issue [think本身就有思考的意思，over the issue删掉] deeply and dialectically since the debate’s purpose [吹毛求疵一点