怎么写英语的自我介绍？

第一篇
Good morning. My name is Jessia. I am a graduate of Beijing University. I have majored in English Literature. As an English major, I've more chances to practise English. I do love this language and hope to find a job in which I can use English. Also, I've taken some courses in economics and business adminisration. If I am lucky enough to be accepted by your company, I am sure it will be the best position for me to make use of what I've learned. I know trading companies have become more and more competitive here, and a job requiring responsibility is a good challenge to me. To be sure, there are many things I must learn in this trade. But if there is a chance, I would be glad to take it. Thank you very much!

第二篇
Hi, my name is xxx. I'm xx years old, a middle school student apparently. I love music very much I study hard. My favorite subject is English.I often find chance to practice English.China has joined WTO and Beijing will host the 2008 O