初二英语作文...

My idol is Gillian Chung.She is a singer and a movie atress.I was mesmerized by her the first time i saw her.From then on, i listen to every song she sang and watch every movie that she starred in.I would really like to see her in person for once.
自己写的，不过偶像竟是阿娇！！！晕
楼上那位语法有些错，比如i don't forget her sweet smile应改为i would never forget her sweet smile

My idol is Gillian Chung, the first saw her in the line, she looks beautiful,she sings well,her films are also funny.I don't forget her sweet smile.Iam so love her!what about you?Do you like her?有点简单~不过你才初二~~应该可以吧！

自己想吧应该可以想出来，我初二的时候，写作文可以说很熟练。

偶像这个单词怎么写阿？