UC知道请高手帮我改下语法问题～～
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The Spring Festival is coming, but I can't feel the ambience of it. I was can’t slept last night.
I have never calm down. Somebody told me, if you love someone that the most happiness was your lover will happy. I don’t think so. Is it even if she betrays to you and to bear the anguish again and again?? No , Is it should not be selfish to me?
Last night she told me that her gratitude more than her love, for me. I was very grieved. A person who I love her at pains. Once hurt also enough? Why hurt me again and again? If you know we are together no result ,why did you come back again? You know I was so happy when you told me get married with me.
Although only a short period of time to come back, I tried change all my life in your way. But you leave me again when the boy com back. Oh!! Why did you?!
改后：The Spring Festival is coming, but I can't feel the ambience of it. I couldn't sleep last night.
I have never been calm down. Somebody told me, if you loved someone, the biggest happiness was that your lover would happy. I don’t think so. Is it even if she betrays you but you bear the anguish again and again?? No , that is too selfish.
Last night she told me that she gratitude more than she love me. I was very grieved. A person who I love at pains. Once again hurt me totally? Why hurt me again and again? If you know there is no reault between us,why did you come back again? You knew I was so happy when you told me to get married .
Although only a short period of time, I have been changing all my life in your way. But you leave me alone again when the boy come back. Oh!! Why did you?!
第三行的was改is
其他的自己慢慢改,太长,错误太多
騲莓牜奶 怎么读啊，不知是什么，看到就想吃，写出的英文和机器比美。
Spring Festival is coming, but I can't feel the ambience of it. I couldn't sleep l