UC知道请帮我看看这段英语是否有语法错误。
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这是我第一次给你的留言。
My English is not so good that the message will be short and maybe there will be a lot of grammatical errors.
我的英语并不是很好所以这封信将会很短，或许还会有很多语法错误~
on the Australian Open,the weather is so hot.How did you adapt to it and faced with different opponents, how you feel？
在澳网上，天气非常热，请问你是怎么适应的，还有面对不同的对手，你的感觉如何？
Last,I hope you will have access to a growing number of honorary.and as a Chinese,welcome you once again came to my motherland.
最后，我希望你会迎得更多的荣誉，还有作为一个中国人，欢迎你再一次来到我的祖国。
Thank you for your time.
感谢你抽时间看完这封留言。
请帮我看看是否有语法错误，还有什么地方可以改改，可以追加分的
感谢
on the Australian Open,the weather is so hot.How did you adapt to it and faced with different opponents, how you feel？
最后的那个应该是How did you feel
Last,I hope you will have access to a growing number of honorary.and as a Chinese,welcome you once again came to my motherland.
那个came应该用come 还有I hope you will have access to a growing number of honorary 把have去掉也可以
也就这么多了吧
1.It was my first message to you换成it was the first time that I left message to you好点，
2.errors换成mistakes好点，
3.How did you adapt to it and faced with different opponents, how you feel？换成How did you adapt to it and face different opponents,how did you feel?
4.last换成at last，
5.welcome you once again came to my motherland换成I will welcome you once again when you come to my motherland.
以上个人意见，仅供参考。
hi,Roger,It was（is，现在时） my first message to（for，表对象） you.
My English is not so（改成that，更地道，that有很，非常的意思） good that（改成so，表原因） the message will be（现在发生的事情，就用