我的英语句子有什么错误？

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有错误的话请详细指出来，谢谢
There are a small number of mistaks in my homework.
(我的作业里有几个错误)
Mrs.John,a young woman neighbour of mine,has gone to Australia.
琼夫人是一个年轻的女人，她是我的邻居，她去了澳大利亚.
I received a lot of red packets these days.
(这几天我收到了很多红包)
I find a few flies in my bowl,feel so sick.
(我发现有几只苍蝇在我的碗里,我觉得恶心)
The magician told the emcee to move that potted plant on this

table.
(魔术师让主持人把那个盆栽搬到桌子上)
I finding this book is different from that book.
(我发现这本书和那本书不一样)

There are a few mistaks in my homework. 不是用那个词造句的话，没必要脱了啥放啥。。。
Mrs.John,a young woman and neighbor of mine,has gone to Australia.
加and或逗号。
I found flies in my bowl, and it makes me feel sick.
三处，不过主要在过去式吧
The magician told the emcee to move that potted plant onto the table. 或者 to move that potted plant up onto the table.不知道哪个更好。自选吧。

I find this book different from that one.

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PS:okay, all done, and I hope I'll get what I deserve.
and happy new year...

sevral mistake
young lady,she is my nerghbourwho has gone to australia
I find a few flies in my bowl and i feel very sick
onto the table
i find this book different from that one

I find a few flies in my bowl,feel so sick.
(我发现有几只苍蝇在我的碗里,我觉得恶心)
应为： I found some flies in my bowl, which made me feel so sick.

I finding this book is different from that book.
(我发现这本书和那本书不一样)
应为： I found this boo