下面这个英语句子有什么错误啊?
来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/16 19:23:07
I was visiting the zoo on that afternoon when I heard bears roaring terriblely.
把on that afternoon 改为in that afternoon, 因为介词搭配是用in ,比如 in the morning 等,而用on 是on that day 等具体日期。
I was visiting the zoo (in) that afternoon when I heard bears roaring terriblely.
I was visiting the zoo (in) that afternoon when I heard bears roaring terriblely
句型 念起来拗口 感觉不对 也就是语感不好 问题出在最后一个单词terribly 让整个句子的结尾很重 感觉句子还没结束 后面还得跟点什么 而且bear roaring总是比较terrible的 所以terribly可以省略
另外 on the afternoon后面应该有具体的日期 所以这里要用(in) the afternoon
可以把句子改成:
1/ I was visiting the zoo that afternoon when I heard the bears roaring.
如果要保留terribly,此句可以这样:
2/I was visiting the zoo that afternoon when I heard the terrible bears'roaring.
这样的话 句子就有平衡了 visit the zoo(n.动物园)对应 hear the roaring (n.吼叫)
或者:
3/I was visiting the zoo that afternoon when I heard the bears roaring, which was so terrible.