请求帮助,下面两个英语句子是否有错误

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请求帮助,下面两个句子是否有错误
请求帮助,下面两个句子是否有错误...我实在看不出来..晕..谢谢了

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In recent years, it has become a matter of great concern of the general public in our society ,especially for those who are confronted with the problem.

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As can be vividly depicted in the drawing ,we can see that some important changes have taken place in the past several years.

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In recent years, it has become a matter of great concern of the general public in our society ,especially (for) those who are confronted with the problem. 括号里的for应该不要

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As can be vividly depicted in the drawing ,we can see that some important changes have (been) taken place in the past several years. 加上been

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In recent years, it has become a matter of great concern of (改成for) the general public in our society ,especially for those who are confronted with the problem.

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As can be(can be 去掉,这里不需要be,如果加了be,前面就得加上it了,否则句子不完整,这里去掉can be 之后只是一个插入语的成分) vividly depicted in the drawing ,we can see that some important changes have taken place in the past several years. (sth takes place 本身是主动的,不需要用被动语态的这里)