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I'm so sorry to hear that your bunny was gone.I love animals too especially tiny little tame ones but I have never tried to keep any animals. Maybe this time I will give it a try and give it my love.
I'm so jealous that you have so many animals around you while I haven't even seen a real sheep.You are so lucky that you have so many animal friends.

I'm so sorry to hear that your bungo was gone.I love animals ,too especially tiny little tame ones but I never tried to keep any animals.Maybe this time I will try it and give it my love.
I'm so jalous that you have so many animals around you while I haven't seen a sheep actually.You are so lucky that you have so many animal friends.

我很抱歉，您的爱丰是去.我动物太特别是微小的温和的，但我从未试图让任何动物.也许这个时候我会尝试，并给予我的爱。

我很jalous ，你有这么多的动物，而你身边，我什至还没有看到一只羊实际上.你是如此幸运，你有这么多的动物朋友。
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I'm so sorry to hear that your bungo was gone.I love animals too, especially tiny little tame ones. But I ne