帮我检查一下下面这段英文的错误

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However, there are some people who holds dissenting opinion on the issue. They see little necessity in adopting such a test, saying that fluent spoken English is only a tiny part of one's competence which we depend to find a ideal job. Besides, as they added, not all jobs need such a superior English ability.

However, there are some people who (hold) dissenting opinion on the issue. They see little necessity in adopting such a test, (stating) that fluent spoken English is only a tiny part of one's competence (in) which we depend (on) to find a ideal job. Besides, () they added, not all jobs (require) such a superior English ability.

括号里表示更换, 增加或除去了的词. 句子的词法也意思基本都正确.

1) holds 改为 hold，应为people是复数，后面的动词应该用复数形式的动词。

2) dissenting opinion 改为 dissenting opinions
competence 改为 competences

However, there are some people who hold the oppossite opinion on this issue. They see little necessity in adopting such a test, saying fluent spoken English is only a tiny part of one's competence which we depend on to find an deal job. Besides, as they added, not all jobs need such a superior English ability