请帮我检查一下，我写的这段给移民官看的英文有没有语法错误。在线等

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请帮我检查一下语法错误和措词，我要给移民官看的，还有在描写我们结婚半年之后，因为感情不合破裂而离婚 的地方能不能再帮我加几句，我不知道怎么写。
我在线等，改得好，我还有20分的加分。帮忙了！！谢谢

Dear Sir or Madam,

I request to cancel the application of immigrating to Canada. My ex-husband is the main application, and I am the vice-applicant. We applied to immigration in May 2006, received File No. on June 9th, 2006. The File No. is B 049588324.
My ex-husband’s name is XXX. We acquainted with each other in May, 2003 and fell in love. He is one year older than me. Two and a half years later, we got married. I was a senior student in the university at that time, and he had worked for more than a year. Then he wanted to immigrate to Canada and I became the vice-application naturally. However, half a year ago, we divorced because the affection is unsuited. We received divorce certificate at September 6th, 2006.
Now one year past, I remembered I still as the vice-applicant. So I write this letter to notify the emigrant officer that we have already

Dear Sir or Madam,

I request to cancel the application of immigrating to Canada. My ex-husband is the main applicant, and I am the vice-applicant. We applied to immigrate in May 2006, and received File No. on June 9th, 2006. The File No. is B 049588324.
My ex-husband’s name is XXX. We were acquainted with each other in May, 2003 and fell in love. He is one year older than me. Two and a half years later, we got married. I was a senior student in the university at that time, and he had been working for more than one year. Then he wanted to immigrate to Canada and I became the vice-applicant consequently. However, half a year ago, we divorced because we found we might not be Mr/Mrs Right for each other. We transacted divorce procedure on September 6th, 2006.
As the vice-applicant, I now write this letter to clarify to the emigrant officer that we have already divorced, and apply to cancel the application of immigration to Canada. I await your earliest authorizat