UC知道作文改错
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各位好心人，我的作文里面有许多语法，时态，和句子结构的错误，请帮我一一指正行吗，不胜感谢。
There are always some disputes about the question whether or not university students should study varied disciplines. Many opponents of these arguments maintain that it is impossible for university students to learn countless courses. And more courses only means wasting time. Nevertheless, in my viewpoint, the opposite is much closer to the truth.
It is certainly that these opponents are right some extent, however, they neglect the fact that if all university students were all only inculcated with specialist course rather than multi-disciplinary curriculums, it would be a failure for the universities and the society. Because the other courses, which seem irrelevant to their majors, also play significant roles in their lives.
For one thing, we should realized the correlation and interaction between different courses and adopt a multi-disciplinary curriculum. It is manifest that all disciplines can stand alone
There are always some disputes about the question whether or not university students should study varied disciplines. Many opponents of these arguments maintain that it is impossible for university students to learn countless courses. And more courses only means wasting time. Nevertheless, in my viewpoint, the opposite is much closer to the truth.
It is certainly that these opponents are right some extent, however, they neglect the fact that if all university students were all only inculcated with specialist course rather than multi-disciplinary curriculums, it would be a failure for the universities and the society. Because the other courses, which seem irrelevant to their majors, also play significant roles in their lives.
For one thing, we should realized the correlation and interaction between different courses and adopt a multi-disciplinary curriculum. It is manifest that all disciplines can stand alone
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