一篇英文改错

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One day in the restaurant where I worked, I am serving a 76.
table of four and each person had ordered the different 77.
kind of fish. Three plate were already on the table when 78.
the man closest to me pointing to one plate and asked me 79.
the name of the fish on it. Before I could answer him, he 80.
continued to ask me the name of the fish on another one 81.
plate. I was about to answer him while I noticed that the 82.
last plate on my tray (托盘) began to fall. They fell noisily 83.
to the floor seconds late, spreading its contents on the 84.
carpet. Everyone stared me and I stood there with a red face. 85.

am--was
the--a
plate--plates
pointing--pointed

one去掉
while--when
They--It
late--later
stared加at
请问为什么这样改,每个都解释一下

1.am--was 由and连接并列句,和后面时态一致。用过去式
2.the--a a different kind of固定搭配 = =
3. plate--plates 三个盘子,当然用复数了 = =
4.pointing--pointed 还是and连接的并列句,看and后面verb的时态,过去式
5.one去掉 +了也是多余的

6.while--when
be about to do+when was/is doing sth+when 更何况while后面的从句一般都需要用进行式,或者while表示转折“然而”

7They--It IT指代物,这里是指盘子。
8。late--later 有比较含义。
9.stared加at 固定搭配,瞪着,记住了。不用问为什么= =

.one去掉 +了也是多余的