请帮我批阅一下英语小作文（1）

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写5－8句左右的句子，描述你在快餐店用餐的情况

I like to eat in a fast-food restauant. Because it is very delicious and very clean. It sells hamburgers,potato chips,fried chicken legs ,drinks and so on . But it is usually high in fat.
Do you like eat in fast-food restaurant.

I like to eat in the fast-food restauant. Because it is very delicious and very clean. It has hamburgers,potato chips,fried chicken legs ,drinks and so on . But it is usually high in fat.
Do you like eat in fast-food restaurant?Let's go!

你写的很好哦！

I like eating in the fast-food restauant. Because it is very delicious and clean. It sells hamburgers,potato chips,fried chicken ,drinks and so on . But it will make you fat.
Do you like eating in the fast-food restaurant?

改了改，这样通顺多了

I like the food in a fast-food restauant. Because it is very delicious and very convinent. Which often sells hamburgers,potato chips,fried chicken legs ,drinks and so on . But it doesn't good for health .In all,I love it.
Do you like it?
这样更简洁，呵呵。

I like eat the fast-food restaurant.Beacause it's very delicious and convenience.There are hamburgers,potato chips,fried chicken legs,drinks and so on.But it's very harmful to health.Do yo