帮忙修改一段话(英文)

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/27 03:08:47
Do what you like.Nothing can stop you flying to your dream.No matter how many troubles are in front of you,never stop!Keep moving!I will almays stand behind you and support you.Remember ,you are the best!(意思大概是这样,就是鼓励一个人,但不知道语法有没有错误,希望各位能帮我修改一下,谢谢)

错大了……
Just do it, nothing can stop your dream.dont care there are how many troubles,just keep going on!不要说stand behind you了,背后灵啊……

给你提点建议吧。首先我觉得文段中的两个stop有点重复,建议可以把那两句合并,如:去掉never stop,no前面的“.”改为“,”。而且troubles和are之间要加个there语法才对哦。最后的remember那里的逗点改为that比较好,不过我觉得用believe in yourself that更好。