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There are several effects of obesity. Because obese people are too fat to move, they have a lot of trouble in their daily life. Obese people need everything is a bigger size. Sometimes they have to make special orders for some items, and they spend more money. Obese people are more apt to get ill. For example, they have high risk to get heart disease, high blood pressure, etc. These are all dangerous diseases. Obese people not only have physical diseases, but they also have more psychic stress.
For a better quality of life, we suggest everybody care their diet. Do not eat too much oily and high protein food. And the most important thing is to do exercises regularly. In this way we can keep a fit, and healthy body to enjoy more fun in life.
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为了更好的生活质量，我们建议每个人都要注意饮食。不要持太多的油性的和高蛋白食品。最重要的是要定期锻炼身体。这样我们就都可以保持一个苗条而健康的身材，来享受更多的生活乐趣。

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