帮写英语短文

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是要一个一个写么？G-O-D!!!
1 I think it is very important to keep the time. Everybody in this world is controled by the time. While the time is stopped is the end of the life. Everybody knows time is the important and there
hasn't have no things could get it. so we won't wast of time,and also the others.If you say to someone you will do something for him,you must kkep you worlds.
2 （举一个例子就可以了吧？！）I like winter.In winter ,we can see the different scences through it---a world full of white.It is so clean in my eyes.we also could play by smow. I like to see the snow fail down slowly in the sky, it also could let me htink about life.
3 I like to read novel in my free time.Reading novels, I could konw something interesting from it. ALSO, i could tast the way that the writer used what likes how to let people feel more realy,we can ues reawords .It is said the more you read,the nicer you could write.
4 i feel the most hard subjuct is h