请高手看看这段翻译是否错误

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/12 11:31:08
我们专注于制造建材与工业涂料产品
我们的核心竞争力源于:
以使用为特征的技术与产品
以市场为基础的模块化资源整合合作机制

We concentrate on manufacturing products of industrial and building materials coatings
Our core competitiveness derives from:
The technology and products characterized by utility
The modular resource integration cooperation mechanism based on market

我们公司的宣言,请高手帮忙看看是否有错误,如果能帮我更正那就感激不尽了

个人建议:

我们专注于制造建材与工业涂料产品
We are specilized in manufacturing building materials and industrial coatings.

我们的核心竞争力源于:
以使用为特征的技术与产品
以市场为基础的模块化资源整合合作机制
Our core competitiveness derives from application-oriented
technology and products as well as the market-based modular resource integration and cooperation mechanism.

还行,你也可以参照我这个翻译:

We focus on the manufacture of building materials and industrial coatings products
Our core competitiveness stems from:
Characterized by the use of technologies and products
Market-based resource integration mechanisms for cooperation Modularized