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1 software development
I first talked about the software development difference of Korea and China with my colleague when we used software which was developed by Korean. All of them thanked it scorn to say. They developed web-server software which is used in Korean by himself. So web-server has already more and more, even include the free, open-source, who still want to waste much money to develop by oneself. When I am in Korean, I found much software which we used everyday they all developed by themselves.
2 visiting
Oildao island sightseeing
Oildao, means “the birds island“, is a silent island which located the western of Korea. Maybe it is not surprise in a little island in Korean, because this country has many beauteous island, but for me that means mystery thing because I have never seen the island before coming here. It need take more than one hour to get there by train. It is the end of four line subway. It need take twenty minutes time to take the 3-20 bus
I first talked about the software development difference of Korea and China with my colleague when we used software which was developed by Korean. All of them thanked it scorn to say. They developed web-server software which is used in Korean by himself. So web-server has already more and more, even include the free, open-source, who still want to waste much money to develop by oneself. When I am in Korean, I found much software which we used everyday they all developed by themselves.
2 visiting
Oildao island sightseeing
Oildao, means “the birds island“, is a silent island which located the western of Korea. Maybe it is not surprise in a little island in Korean, because this country has many beauteous island, but for me that means mystery thing because I have never seen the island before coming here. It need take more than one hour to get there by train. It is the end of four line subway. It need take twenty minutes time to take the 3-20 bus
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1软件开发
我首先谈到软件开发的差异，韩国和中国的同事时，我们用软件开发由韩国。他们都感谢它不屑说。他们开发出了一些网络服务器软件，是用韩国自己的。让网络服务器已经越来越多，甚至包括自由，开放源码，他们仍然要浪费很多钱发展自己。当我在韩国时，我发现许多软件，我们日常使用的，他们都制定了自己。
2访问
oildao岛观光
oildao ，意思是"鸟之岛" ，是一个无声的岛屿，其中位于西部的韩国。也许是不足为奇一个小岛，在韩国人，因为这个国家有许多美容岛，但对我而言意味着神秘的事情，因为我从来没见过岛上之前来到这里。它需要采取一个多小时得火车。它是结束四线地铁。它需要采取20分钟的时间以3-20巴士前往海边。这是一个好地方，可以吃各种海鲜，很有意思游客处处。
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