请大家帮忙改错,刚给国外的一个朋友写了封邮件.

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/24 00:59:07
I always think of you when I was on my way home with my notebook computer.
Now I feel so similar with you when you in CD former.
For working displaced from home, alone one person.

xx, you are the hardest working person I’ve seen.
You always listen very carefully to our views, so now I am still learning, like your seriously listen the feedback when I working with my colleagues;
You always work hardly in the company's corner though work time off, this lead to I learn from you I often work overtime never stingy.
When I heard from you that you will back to Sp last year, I felt very disappointed but also very supportive indeed.

xx, I’m proud of have a so good friend of you. And feel very luck have the opportunity can learn the advantages from you.
Your behavior is always affected me.

At the beginning of New Year, wish you all is well, good health, success in work!
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xx, I’m proud that I can make friends

I always think of you when I am on my way home using laptop.Now I am so similar to you---working far away from home and being alone.(搂主是要表达这个意思吗?)
XX,I've never seen anyone who worked harder than you do.And now I am carefully dealing with the feedbacks from my colleagus just like you did when you were here.And your devotion to work always inspires me so that now I always do extra work even though I am not in work time.
So when i knew that you will leave for Sp next year,I felt upset but also supported you from the bottom of my heart.
XX,I feel so proud that I can have such a good friend like you and feel so lucky that i can learn your advantages to improve myself.You really inspires me a lot.
And finally,I wish happy new year!And good luck for everything!