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I am an ordinary person. Of course, I have one nose and two eyes. It is easy for you to discover it!
I am an ordinary student. From Monday to Friday, I have to go to school as other student.
I am good at studying, but I’m not good at exam. I seldom get good scores, I often make some small mistakes. Although I seldom good scores, I never give up. I think once I try my best, I will get it repaid. I didn’t know how to ride bike until 12 years old. In a summer vacation, my mum asked me to learn ride a bike. At the beginning, I can't keep balanced at all. I fell on the ground again and again. My leg hurt, my arm hurt. But I didn’t give up. Finally, I learned how to ride a bike. Now, I always go to school by bike.
In many ways, I am not the best one, but I never give up. When I get in trouble, I always try it again and again.
Never give up, this is me.
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I am an ordinary person who just like others has one nose and two eyes. (Of course it is easy for you to discover it!)
I am an ordinary student who has to go to school from Monday to Friday,
As to my study, I’m not good at exam though I am good at studying,. Because I seldom get good scores for I often make some small mistakes. However, I never give up. I think I will get it great progress if I try my best to study.
Riding a bike maybe very easy, but it’s not easy for me. I didn’t know how to ride bike until 12 years old. I can clearly remember it was a hot summer vacation, my mum taught me how to ride a bike. At the beginning, I can't keep balanced at all. So I fell on the ground again and again. My leg and arm hurt were all hurt.. But I didn’t give up, just like the old saying goes:” Life is pain, get used to it !”Finally, I learned how to ride a bike with sunny smile. From then on, I always go to school by bike.
In a word, I am not the best one In many way