请帮忙检查一下英语语法错误~~谢谢~

I am no longer a good girl, and I cannot find the way to home.

I got through the city centre, ran across the zebra-crossing with my little Teddy-bear.
At the last, I stood on the crowded street.
The city liked an interlaced maze, I got lost in it.

Rains fell down from the dark sky.
Cars passed by in front of me.
Nobody could see a tear rolled down my cheek.

Teddy asked me, when we would get home.
How could I answer it?

I was a girl, who had ambitions for the studies, and the ideals.
I was a girl, who used to in a good mood and had smile on the face.
I was a girl, who knew what she had to do, and what was good for her.
I was a girl, who…

God is a clown. He likes make joke with the children who are intractability.

I tried to find some one could help me, but where is he/she?
I tried to find the way to home, but where is the way?
Who can tell me?...