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Good morning!
It’s been a long time. How have you been?
I tell you a good message. I will move in a new house at soon. You know my today house is about 50 square meters. However my new house is it’s triple at least! It’s a big three-room apartment. My family is only three people. It’s big enough.
Let me introduce the new house. Firstly let me talk about indoor part. There are three bedrooms and two bathrooms and a big dinning room and a chicken. Two of bedrooms are quite a reasonable size, but the other one is rather small. We are going to make into a study. But I have no time to get round to it. Secondly let me talk about outdoor part. Outdoor view is beautiful. Next to the door is a big garden. Not only we grow a lot glasses and flowers. But also we set up several easy appliances that we often use it exercise.
Finally we make a lot of decoration in indoor part. The whole house made people fell excellent.
Haw-haw, summer vacation is co
Hello Jack!
Good morning!
It’s been a long time. How have you been?(你要是愿意的话,可以换成How's going,口语化,生活化一点儿,可以理解为:最近怎么样啊?)
I tell you a good message.(可以换成I have a good news,楼住的句子没错,但不是习惯用法.) I will move in a new house at soon.(把AT去掉) You know my today house is about 50 square meters.(My today house有误,可以换成The house I'm living is about 50 square meters.) However my new house is it’s triple at least!(However,the new house will be 3 times bigger than the older one at least! ) It’s a big three-room apartment.(可以考虑把Three-room换成Three bedrooms,较符合外国人的习惯) My family is only three people. It’s big enough. (There are only three people in my family, so it's big enough.)
Let me introduce the new house. Firstly let me talk about indoor part.(let me和第一句有重复的感觉,建议整句可以改为 We could talk about the indoor part firstly.) There are three bedrooms and two bathrooms and a big dinning room and a chicken.(and太多,英语句子中可以用逗号隔开,最后两样东西用and相连就好了所以可以改为There are three bedrooms,