急求,帮我修改下面试的自我介绍

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/07 10:34:54
是应付英国大学面试官的,请好心人修改下,指出有什么不妥的,另外针对我这个介绍猜下他回提些什么问题,并把答案附加下,要用英文哦,万分感谢!!!!

How are you?I am very excited to be here to day. my name isXXX.I come from Hunan province.18-year-old this year,my character is comparatively open and dear.
My English is not porefct, but I am able to carry on a dialouge.
As the saying goes: The riverboat cannot not have the direction, the life not to be able not to have the ideal, this study can my social ideal and the life value, hoped that everybody can approve me,for me this opportunity!

Good Morning/ afternoon.
My name isXXX. I am from Hunan province. I just become 18 this year. I am very open-minded and would relish this opportunity to come here today.

My English is not porefct, but I will try to do my best to carry on a dialouge.

As old saying goes: The riverboat cannot not have the direction, the life not to be able not to have the ideal. This reveal my social ideal and attitude towards the life value. I hoped that everybody can approve me, please give me this opportunity!

Good luck :)