我写的英语自我介绍,帮我修改下.

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Introduce myself
Hello everyone.My name is Mai and my English name is Nancy.I’m a 12 years old girl.I from DongGaoDi number two Primary School.I was born in November 10.1994.I have a lots Hobbies,such as piano,drawing,computer and reading.I like animals very much, such us rabbits,cats and dogs.I think animal in our best friend.So we will love them. My favorite sports is swimming.My favorite food is pizza.There are three people in my family,my parents and I.My mather is a work.She likes handwriting and cooking.My father is a worker too.He likes football and fishing.They are very kind of me.I love my parents.I like smile very much.I have a drem.I’m looking forward to become a Olympic Games volunteer in 2008.I will study English harder.
It’s me.A kindly,friendly and lovely girl.

本人刚小学毕业英语水平一般..请各位指点下..因为这个作业老师要收,我想写好点...

Hello everyone. My name is Mai and my Englishi name is Nancy. I'm a 12years old giol. I come from DongGaoDi number two Primary School. I have many hobbies, such as piano, drawing, computer and reading. I like animals very much, for example, rabbits, cats and dogs. I think animal is our best friend, so we must be kind of them. My favorite sports is swimming. My favorite food is pizza. There are three people in my family, my parents and I. Both my mother and father are worker. My mother likes not only handwriting but also cooking. My father likes football and fishing. They are very care of me. I love my parents. I also like smile very much. I have a dream, I'm looking forward to become a Olympic Games volunteer in 2008. I will study English harder.
It's me. A kindly, friendly and lovely girl.