这有语法问题么

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I am that one comes from Chinese Guangxi girl , national minority , I live in a county town being embosomed in hills. I am fond of having fun in nature from childhood right away , run like boy did. I hope that the friend on every side can because of me but happy. I like to read , to howl with laughter for book middle is stated or the tear is wet full garment front. I like to be together with child, because of my feel like and they are together simple , the most natural , the teacher is such therefore I have chosen occupation. I am by self valuation: In the sometimes the natural world , sincerity , optimism, are a little bit naive……Presumedly, do so , maybe there are still hereafter to in expectation of by my self pleasantly surprised finding that.
这有米有语法上的问题？或者表达上还有米有更合理的？谢谢啦~~

我的天 不是我说 每句话都有错

这样改就对了。
I am a girl who come from Guangxi province,a minority .
I live in a county which is above some hills.
I am fond of having fun in nature from my childhood ,I runned like boy. I hope that the friend from every side can be happy.
I like to read .I like to stay with child, because they are simple ,most natural.So I chose to be a teacher. My self valuation: sincerity , optimism, a little bit naive.
后面的实在离谱我看不懂了。。