UC知道请求翻译一小段英语，关于钢铁生产的 （100分）
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/13 21:29:55
原文：钢铁企业面对的市场竞争主要表现在产品质量和顾客服务上，提高产品质量成为钢铁企业提高竞争力的根本途径。文章根据日常工作中的实际情况，结合质量控制发展的趋势，针对宝钢钢铁企业新机组在钢卷生产时对质量控制所产生的问题提出了面向钢卷生产控制的现状和钢卷生产质量控制存在的问题，以及钢卷生产质量控制的对策进行了分析和阐述。
我的翻译：Iron and steel enterprises to face competition in the market mainly reflected in product quality and on customer service, improve product quality to become the iron and steel enterprises to improve the competitiveness of the fundamental approach. Article under the day-to-day work of the actual situation, combined with the development trend of quality control for new units Baoshan iron and steel enterprises in the steel production for quality control issues arising from the production of steel for the control of the status and quality control of steel production existence of the problem, as well as steel production quality control measures were analyzed and explained.
“Baoshan iron and steel enterprises”这里有问题，宝钢的官方翻译是Bao Steel，这个名字国际认可的。
我的翻译：
Market competition that iron and steel enterprises are mainly faced with is product quality and customer service. As a result, the essential approach to help is improving product quality. According to reality of daily work, trend of quality control, the author not only analyzed several problems exsisting in Bao Steel's quality control when producing steel by new set of equipments, in current situation of production and quality control, but also figured out and explained some solutions to quality control of iron and steel production.
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请求翻译一小段英语，关于钢铁生产的 （100分）
悬赏分：100 - 离问题结束还有 14 天 19 小时
小弟写论文中，其中有一段描述宝钢钢铁厂生产的，必须翻译成英文，可是本人英文太烂，翻译后导师大怒，评曰：毫无语法可言。所以只好请大大们出手相助，小弟这里先谢了，今后一定发奋学习。（特附上我的破烂翻译）
原文：钢铁企业面对的市场竞争主要表现在产品质量和顾客服务上，提高产品质量成为钢铁企业提高竞争力的根本途径。文章根据日常工作中的实际情况，结合质量控制发展的趋势，针对宝钢钢铁企业新机组在钢卷生产时对质量控制所产生的问题提出了面向钢卷生产控制的现状和钢卷生产质量控制存在的问题，以及钢卷生产质量