UC知道英语高手们， 能帮我检查一下英语自我介绍吗？
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我很高兴在这儿向大家作自我介绍，我叫 ，来自于黑龙江省哈尔滨一个美丽的城市。在异国留学的五年中 以优异的成绩毕业日中翻译专业，并取得商务日语2级，半工半读的就学过程，我养成了坚强 独立的性格 并且在学习实践经验上取得了长足的进展，这也正是我留学后得到的最大的财富。并且应用到实际工作当中，积极努力，与同事合睦相处，为公司贡献一份力量。
I am very happy for everyone in here to introduce myself, My name is , from Harbin, Heilongjiang Province in a beautiful city. Foreign students at five years with outstanding professional grade graduation Japanese Translation and Japanese business get two, work-study program of the school process, I developed a strong and independent personality and practical experience in the study has been made on progress, and that is what my students get the greatest wealth. And applied to practical work, the positive efforts together with colleagues Renmu Get along with, in order to contribute to a company.
I am very happy for everyone in here to introduce myself, My name is , from Harbin, Heilongjiang Province in a beautiful city. Foreign students at five years with outstanding professional grade graduation Japanese Translation and Japanese business get two, work-study program of the school process, I developed a strong and independent personality and practical experience in the study has been made on progress, and that is what my students get the greatest wealth. And applied to practical work, the positive efforts together with colleagues Renmu Get along with, in order to contribute to a company.
有一些错误。第一句语法错误，
可改为“I'm glad to be here to give you a brief introduction about myself.”
第二句改为“I come from a beautiful city named Harbin,in Heilongjiang Province.”
第三句“I had studied 5 years abroad,and I graduated in Japanese and Chinese major with an excellent mark.”