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下面是我的一次考试的英语作文 请各位大侠帮我检查一下这篇短文的语法错误，因为我念英语全部是用语感的，有没有错误我自己检查不出来。 谢谢咯
I'm sorry to disturb you .I read in the newspaper today that wu will build up a new tran station.So I want to give some suggestions to you.
Frist,we should design special wheelchair ramp for the disablied, so they could easy to enter the station.Second , we should think for the
disabled when design the WC,the door should wide enough to make the disabled easy to erter the WC,and the tap should be more lower,so the disabled
could reach it easy .Third,we should build some special seat for old people、children and disabled .so that they could rest when they were tired .
best wish to you family.
I'm sorry to disturb you .I read in the newspaper today that wu will build up a new tran station.So I want to give some suggestions to you.
Frist,we should design special wheelchair ramp for the disablied, so they could easy to enter the station.Second , we should think for the
disabled when design the WC,the door should wide enough to make the disabled easy to erter the WC,and the tap should be more lower,so the disabled
could reach it easy .Third,we should build some special seat for old people、children and disabled .so that they could rest when they were tired .
best wish to you family.
毛病还是有的，下面是修改过后的,仔细看看：
I'm sorry to disturb you .I read in the newspaper today that wu will build a new train station.So I want to give some suggestions to you.
Frist,we should design special wheelchair ramps for the disabled so that they could easily enter the station. Second , we should consider more about the disabled when designing the WC.The door should be wide enough to let them enter the WC easily,and the tap should be lower so that they could reach it easily .Third,we should build special seats for old people、children and the disabled so that they could rest when they are tired .
Best wish to your family.