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good morning ,everyone

Today, i would like to talk about is"The Day After Tomorrow".It is a science fiction movie. This movie was directed by Roland Emmerich in 2004 .The main actor of this movie is Jack Hall who is government climatologist . One day, Jack had presented his reseach to a conferenceon global warming . He said at rhe conference , the ice age could happen again in may be 100 to 1000 year from that time.After that, the world's climate system changes for the worst.

I think the mid part is the most impressive part of the film when i have watched .Because the city was flooded from the film. It is an unbelievable scene.Besides,there were many various nature disaster which had ruined the Earth.

Therefore , i realize the disaster of nature was ruthless from this film. So, we must cherish and care for the nature in order to protect the Earth.

That's the end of my presentation.Thank you!

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good morning ,everyone

Today, what i would like to talk about is"The Day After Tomorrow".It is a science fiction movie. This movie was directed by Roland Emmerich in 2004 .The main charactor of this movie is Jack Hall, who is a government climatologist . One day, Jack present his reseach at a conference about global warming . He says at rhe conference that the ice age could happen again in maybe 100 to 1000 years from that time on.After that, the global climate system would change for the worst.

I think the middle part is the most impressive part of the film.Because the city is flooded from the film. It is an unbelievable scene.Besides,there are many various nature disasters which ruines the Earth.

Therefore , i realize the disaster of nature is ruthless from this film. So, we must cherish and care for the nature as to protect the Earth.

That's the end of my presentation.Thank you!

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