UC知道请纠正我的英语日记语法错误
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It's raining again.
To be frank,I'm fed up with this tiny city.Always rain,always wet,always need to armed yourself with an umbrella.
Well,I decide to give myself a totally free morning to do something pointless.Lost time is never found again,am I being extravagant?
I had a little baby sister in my dream last night.Mama doted on her and I became the superfluous person.I cried with all of my heart.I begged of mama don't leave me alone.But she made no response to my begged except for a complicated smile.I can't stop cring until I felt it's hard to breathe and then woke up with a start.
What a fool I am.Actually,I know deep inside my mind that mama is the only one who would never hurt me.
Start writing diary in english is pretty hard to me.My poor grammar make me like an idiot and drive me crazy.
Anyway,all things are difficult before they are easy.From the political point of view,my stupid grammar prove
To be frank,I'm fed up with this tiny city.Always rain,always wet,always need to armed yourself with an umbrella.
Well,I decide to give myself a totally free morning to do something pointless.Lost time is never found again,am I being extravagant?
I had a little baby sister in my dream last night.Mama doted on her and I became the superfluous person.I cried with all of my heart.I begged of mama don't leave me alone.But she made no response to my begged except for a complicated smile.I can't stop cring until I felt it's hard to breathe and then woke up with a start.
What a fool I am.Actually,I know deep inside my mind that mama is the only one who would never hurt me.
Start writing diary in english is pretty hard to me.My poor grammar make me like an idiot and drive me crazy.
Anyway,all things are difficult before they are easy.From the political point of view,my stupid grammar prove
she made no response to my begged except for a complicated smile.'begging'
很有想法的人，写的不错，中文肯定很好！
我觉得，不一定需要太注意语法，虽然你的语法有很多的bug，但是，你的英语，已经很有感觉了。
呵呵
my qq is 792383669，hopefully we may talk a thing or two online later when it is available！
看了,估计我自己都写不出这种文章,自愧不如
But she made no response to my beg except for a complicated smile.
Start writing diary in English is pretty hard to me.
my stupid grammar prove me to be a hundred percent patriot.
Anyway,all things are difficult before they are easy.(其中的Anyway最好改为However,不过不改也不算错误)
由于能力有限,只能找到这些,见谅
呵呵，我不喜欢给别人的作文改错。不过这篇日记颇有意思。尤其最后一句话