UC知道求高人们帮我修改一下英语作文
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Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a beautiful and modern city with a long history.It is the capital of Guangdong Province.And it is also the city which the 2010 Asian Olympic Games is going to hold in.We Cantonese are very proud of it.
As the Pearl River runs through Guangzhou,Guangzhou is famous for its seafood and beautiful pleases.For example,many kinds of the fish are very taxty,taking the Pearl River Boat Trip is wonderful.When you are sailling on the Pearl River,you may see a lot of tall and modern buildings.There are some lights in the building,so it looks so bright like many stars.And there are lots of old and traditional houses,too.The trip become more romantic because of them.I think you must be in love with the city.
Of course,Cantonese food is delicious.The seafood here is very fresh.And we like going to the restaurant to drink tea and have some dimson in the morning.It is a little special.There are all kinds of food in Guangzhou.such as th
1 “And it is also the city which the 2010 Asian Olympic Games is going to hold in.”中Asian Olympic Games 应该是被举办，所以用被动语态：And it is also the city which the 2010 Asian Olympic Games is going to [be held] in ." 楼上的错啦，要用过去分词的
2 "We Cantonese are very proud of it. "中we和Cantonnese是两个主语，重复了，所以应去掉We 不用改的，可以说We Cantonese 的
As the Pearl River runs through Guangzhou,Guangzhou is famous for its seafood and beautiful {places}.For example,many kinds of {fish} are very {tasty},{and} taking the Pearl River Boat Trip is wonderful.When you are {sailing} on the Pearl River,you may see a lot of tall and modern buildings.There are some lights in the {buildings} ,so {they look} so bright like many stars.And there are lots of old and traditional houses,too.The trip {becomes} more romantic because of them.{I think you will fall in love with the city after the trip.}
Of course,Cantonese food is delicious.The seafood here is very fresh.And we like going to