UC知道帮我看看我写的这封英语信
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I, as a sophomore in the university, am writing here to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of PR assistant which you have advertised on poster.
The reasons why I am suitable for the job are numerous, with the following two being the foremost. To begin with, a mass of time is available for me to concentrate on the job. Besides, I was the students’ union chairman, so I have abundant experiences in administration and its like.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Your sincerely,
X X
第一句的可以把I放到am 的前面，没有必要放在开头，直接写成：As a sophomore in the university ,I am ...这样会更加自然些。还有就是I have abundant experience(这里经验是不可数名词，不能加s),its like 可以换成likelihood ，这样会感觉更合适点。最后就是你写信不一定别人就会同意你的申请，别人一般会先写信通知你是否录用你，所以最后最好 用：I am looking forward to hear from you .呵呵，这是我的一点小建议，希望能帮上你。
Dear Sirs,
re: your advistisement on the poster
I am writing to apply for the position of PR assistant which you advertised on the poster.
I am a sophomore in the university. I think that I am qualified because I have plenty of time to concentrate on this job and I will work hard to fulfill your requirements. Besides, I was the Students' Union Chairman, therefore I have abundant experiences in administration.
Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a sophomore in university. I write here to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the