UC知道请高手给我这篇英语自我介绍提点意见和建议！
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Good morning/afternoon, dear professors. I’m very glad to have this chance to introduce myself.
My name is XX and I graduated from Huazhong University of science and technology, major in management of medicine and health, which ranks among the best in china. During five-year study time since 2002, I did a good work in both study and school activities. As a student union officer, I organized collage magazine show, paper competition; As a class committee member, I organized Mid-autumn Festival trip, New Year party; As the commissary in charge of studies, I moot a case to practice court debate, in charge of communication between professors and students; As a class member, I took part in debating competition and won the first prize; Not only did I win the scholarship but also I was awarded “the excellent graduate”, “the best Party member”, “the excellent student council leader” and “the excellent class leader”. No pains, no gains.
Before graduating from school, I went to Ministr
My name is XX and I graduated from Huazhong University of science and technology, major in management of medicine and health, which ranks among the best in china. During five-year study time since 2002, I did a good work in both study and school activities. As a student union officer, I organized collage magazine show, paper competition; As a class committee member, I organized Mid-autumn Festival trip, New Year party; As the commissary in charge of studies, I moot a case to practice court debate, in charge of communication between professors and students; As a class member, I took part in debating competition and won the first prize; Not only did I win the scholarship but also I was awarded “the excellent graduate”, “the best Party member”, “the excellent student council leader” and “the excellent class leader”. No pains, no gains.
Before graduating from school, I went to Ministr
个人认为教授用Doctors会好一些
依我一点薄见，文章中间那一段很难把握~要突出自己的才能吧，又不能让别人读到傲气，但又要突出自己……这个您得斟酌斟酌~
进修浙大后对你有什么影响呢？会对你，对对方有什么goods呢？可以说一下吧~去了浙大，你又打算怎样好好学习永不放弃呢~这点水，还是要吹的……
祝你好运！may you succeed~
我认为：公私兼顾饥饿感就大方广泛党和国家东风浩荡黄齑淡饭附件好看的积分和客服电话就发到分估计花费的客户端放寒假就不给发货费点卡何健飞道福建工会降低很多分进合击就舒服黄金分割还能给福建的好地方规范化经济法惊魂甫定
对浙大的向往和自己的性格特点（适合读研的）