UC知道英语改错，谢谢啦
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应该都是语法错误，麻烦大家帮忙给一下，最好给出一点点解释，谢谢啦
what do you do on the internet?
answer:
really a lot of thing, Let me see, I almost surf on the internet everday,I like to search information about my majoy, for example,like how to take care of a baby who suffers from diarrhea. there are many meand on the internet,I can select the best one to learn.
And I also like to look for the weather forecast though the internet.It's useful for me to know the weather ,i can know wheather I need to take an umbrella with me or not.I don't want to get soaked, it's awfull.
what's more ,I enjoy chatting with my friend though QQ which is a very popular chatting software in china.
what do you do on the internet?
answer:
really a lot of thing, Let me see, I almost surf on the internet everday,I like to search information about my majoy, for example,like how to take care of a baby who suffers from diarrhea. there are many meand on the internet,I can select the best one to learn.
And I also like to look for the weather forecast though the internet.It's useful for me to know the weather ,i can know wheather I need to take an umbrella with me or not.I don't want to get soaked, it's awfull.
what's more ,I enjoy chatting with my friend though QQ which is a very popular chatting software in china.
Actually, I do a lot of things on the internet. Let mee see, I surf on the internet almost everyday. I like to search about information concerning my major. For example, I am interested in methods of caring for a baby suffering from diarrhea. There are many choice on the internet that I could select from . I also enjoy reading the weather forcast from the internet. It is useful to know about the weather, so I could be prepared when I need an umbrella or not. I don't like to be soaked, it's aweful.
What is better is that I enjoy chatting with my friends on QQ. QQ is a very popular chatting software in China.
Do not start sentence with AND
You have quite a lot of comma splice and run on sentences.
改哪的？