能否帮我判一下英语作文

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One winter morning. I found it was snowy. I dressed more casually. I was playing snowy. So I was faster to go out.I was playing snow. The snow stopped when I got to school. I walked to my class. I was complaining to Eve about of snow stopped. And then I was finding a broom. We went to paths and we were cleaning the paths. We were very happy. And then we were making a snowman. We were having fun in the playground when the bell rang.

一个冬天早晨。 我发现它是多雪的。 我穿戴了随便。 我是使用多雪。 因此我是更加快速的出去。我演奏雪。 当我到学校，雪停止了。 我走了到我的类。 我抱怨对伊芙被停止的雪。 我然后发现一把笤帚。 我们去道路，并且我们清洗道路。 我们是非常愉快的。 我们然后做一个雪人。 当响铃敲响了，我们获得乐趣在操场。
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