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last night i went to the KTV with my firends. This was the fist timetaht Ihave there and at first I did't want to go. I was upset the whole afternoon because of I didn't do well me . I dare not have try. I was afraid that I couldn't sing good. Encouraged by my classmates,Isang an English song. Soon I became cheerful and above all I regained self-confidence .I shouldn't lose my heart just for one or two failure,for I still have chances to try.
有个地方打错了。应该是 This was the first time that i have been there .
还有个 第二行的后面：I didn't do well in the math exam. At the KTV ,anybody sang happily except me. I dare not have try.
漏了一个。 self-confidence 后面有个句子：I believe that worse enemy in one's life is oneself.

I was upset during the whole afternoon because I didn't do well in the math exam. At the KTV ,everybody sang happily except me. I dare not to have tried.
I was afraid that I couldn't sing well.
I believe that the worst enemy in one's life is oneself.

because of 应为 because dare not to have a try I couldn't sing well

this--it becauce of ---because have try---have a try good--well failture+s 仅代表个人意见