求英语高手帮忙,英语短文改错。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/14 18:30:28
how much times do you spend with your parents.when did you last tell them what is on your mind? you parents are your dearest people in the world when you are young .and they always case of you deep. but even though many children still love their mum and dad,families may become more close as you get older. the end of the year is a time for families to get together. have you ever thought what you can show your parents that you love them? find chance and do something for them or to have a sincere talk with them. if you can do this,your parents will be very happy.先谢谢了,应该有九个或者十个错误。。。

times→time times 次数,可数 这里是时间
is→was what is on your 前面过去时态
you→your you parents are your 显然有问题
deep→deeply deeply 才是深深的意思
more→less 根据语境是变少了
the→a 不是特定的年份
what→how 怎么表示你的爱
find chance →find a chance
to have 的to 去掉

改错要多做才有感觉,加油哦~