英语高手帮忙改错

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1. Of the two lectures,the first was by far the best one ,partly because the person who delivered it had such a pleasant voice.

2.Acconrding to our estimate,only one out of there company managers have been trained in the field of management.

3. Today we have made great achievements,but tomorrow we shall win still great victories.

4.Lewis had to travel by bus as his car had been damaged in an accident some days before and he was failed to get it repaired.

5. Collecting toy cars as a hobby becomes increasingly popular during the past fifly years.

1, 把best改为better; 两者比较,不能用best;

2. have been trained 改为has been trained; 因为主语是one;
至于里面的拼写错误,你自己应该知道.

3. but tomorrow we shall win still great victories. 改为but tomorrow we shall win even greater victories.

4. he was failed改为he failed

5. increasingly popular改为more and more popular

. best-better 两者比较 用比较级better
2. have been- has been 单数第三人称用 has
3. still great---still greater still 含更加的意思,
所以不用改为even
4. was failed --- failed 很明显这里不能用被动语态
5. becomes---became the past ... years 用一般过去
时,而非一般现在时和现在完成时。而句中
increasingly popular等于more and more popular

PS:increasingly + adj. 表示越来越... 是完全正确
的用法,可替代比较级的adj.+ er and adj.+er
和more and more + adj.的用法。