请英语高手帮忙修改一篇作文,谢谢!!!

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I am learning English all by myself ,two months later I will participate a test , writing part is kind of scary ,hoping someone can help to improve my composition below .Thank you very much!!!

“when people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.”do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?use specific resons and examples to explain your position.”

Does luck have anything to do with success?
I agree that when people succeed, it is because of hard work .Luck has nothing to do with success. Luck only for those prepared people .

Although sometimes luck play a part in people’s success,but it is far from being a main reason . If a person who don’t study hard ,it is impossible for him to get high grades in school. In a test, even with the help of luck, a person can not always choose the right answer from A,B,C,D. Every Nobel Prize winners, or those wealthy persons all gained their great success by cons

I am learning English all by myself ,(for) two months later I will participate a test (.) Writing part is kind of scary .And I hope someone can help me improve my composition below .Thank you very much!!!

“when people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.”do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.”

Does luck have anything to do with success?
I agree that when people succeed, it is because of hard work .Luck has nothing to do with success. Luck only for those prepared people .

Although sometimes luck play a part in people’s success,but it is far away from being a main reason . If a person who don’t study hard ,it is impossible for him to get high grades in school. In tests, even with the help of luck, a person can not always choose the right answer from A,B,C,D. Every Nobel Prize winner, or those wealthy persons all gained their great succe