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These days it seems that more university students are having a girlfriend or boyfriend than ever before. Therefore, many people hold widely different views on the issue of whether it does well to students. The reasons for this are twofold.
Proponents of the view believe that having a lover in university meets a lot of advantages. Firstly, in order to find a suitable partner who can keep our company and take care of us for a long time, it is essential for us to have such a wonderful relationship with some people. Secondly, your lover is your forever friend. Whatever situation you encounter, he or she will help you without any consideration. For instance, if you want to eat something without going out, call him and then he will soon take a delicious meal behind your door. And, however sorrowful a matter is, you can bear your heart to him. I am certain that he will listen to all your troubles quite patiently. Fourthly and more importantly, we can develop a sense of responsibility wh

These days it seems that more university students are having a girlfriend or boyfriend than ever before. (These days, there are more university students being in a relationship than ever before.) Therefore, many people hold widely different views on the issue of whether it does well to students. The reasons for this are twofold. (I’m not sure what do you mean by saying this sentence, but it seems that English does have such kind of saying. My advice is to change into “There are both advantages and disadvantages”)

Proponents of the view believe that having a lover in university meets a lot of advantages. Firstly, in order to find a suitable partner who can keep our company and take care of us for a long time, it is essential for us to have such a wonderful relationship with some people. (Firstly, it’s wonderful to find a suitable partner who can keep company and take care of each other for a long time.)

Secondly, your lover is your forever friend. Whatever sit