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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/16 19:00:07
Bonaparte and his friend Noble, two Irish, are in charge of guarding two Englishmen, Belcher and Hawkings, captured during the Irish independent war. For them, their relationship is more based on their friendship than the relation of guard-prisoner. The two Englishmen become quickly friends with Irish people with their lovable manner. Belcher is quiet and helpful while Hawkings is talkative. However, the two Irishman were told that four Irish prisoners were killed by English army. As revenge, they are forced to kill their prisoners who are also their friends by duty.

Since the very beginning, the readers see a clear display of the difference between two groups of men. On one hand, we have Belcher and Hawkings who were referred constantly as “Englishmen”. On the other hand, the main characters and his friends are referred as “us”. The referrals indicate a deep gulf between the two sides that cannot be bridged. Moreover, they are also facing the dilemma of consider the Englis

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1."become quickly friends "改"become friends quickly"
2."the two Irishman were told "改"the two Irishman are told " 时态要全文一致!

who are captured
than a relation of
with Irish people because of their lovable manner.
kill their prisons as well as their friends by duty
the readers have seen
characters and their friends
prisoners or friends
…………

第五行,Irishman - Irishmen
第五行 However, the two Irishman were told that four 如果这句用were那么整篇文章都应该用过去时,不知道你的文章说的是现在的事情还是过去的事情。要统一。