UC知道英语短文评析。
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请帮我看一下我的作文，有错误的地方请指出，回答时并且附上相应的语法知识。
题干：
短文应包含以下信息：今天是星期天，天气晴朗。我们和来自加拿大的英语老师爱丽丝来到北山（north hill）。瞧！汤姆和五个男同学在踢足球，吉娜和一些女同学在放风筝。我和爱丽丝正在拍照，爱丽丝和我们都非常高兴。
A Nice Sunday
Today is Sunday. It’s a very warm and lovely day. We’re coming
to north hill with our English teacher, Alice. She’s from Canada.
And she often helps me for English. Look! Tom and five boys are
playing soccer. Gina and many girls are flying kites. I an taking
photos with Alice. Alice and we are very happy.
指出错误地方，并打上相应的语法知识（如果错误地方有相应的语法知识的话）
还有：
哪两个句子正确？（写序号就可以了。）
A. How a sunny day B. How sunny day?
C. What a sunny day D. What sunny day?
A Nice Sunday 是题目。
I am taking photos with Alice. 打成I an taking photos with Alice.了。
题干：
短文应包含以下信息：今天是星期天，天气晴朗。我们和来自加拿大的英语老师爱丽丝来到北山（north hill）。瞧！汤姆和五个男同学在踢足球，吉娜和一些女同学在放风筝。我和爱丽丝正在拍照，爱丽丝和我们都非常高兴。
A Nice Sunday
Today is Sunday. It’s a very warm and lovely day. We’re coming
to north hill with our English teacher, Alice. She’s from Canada.
And she often helps me for English. Look! Tom and five boys are
playing soccer. Gina and many girls are flying kites. I an taking
photos with Alice. Alice and we are very happy.
指出错误地方，并打上相应的语法知识（如果错误地方有相应的语法知识的话）
还有：
哪两个句子正确？（写序号就可以了。）
A. How a sunny day B. How sunny day?
C. What a sunny day D. What sunny day?
A Nice Sunday 是题目。
I am taking photos with Alice. 打成I an taking photos with Alice.了。
1.We’re coming 改成 We come,因为come是短暂性动词，We’re coming 表示我们快来到了...
2.hill with our English teacher, Alice...改为hill with our English teacher named（或called） Alice...中间不要搞个“，”
3.She’s from Canada. And she...我觉得改为 She’s from Canada and she...比较好点，这样可以突出句子的连贯性紧凑性。
4.she often helps me for English. 其中for改为with合适点。help sb with sth表示帮助某人做某事，比如：marry 经常帮助妈妈做家务，可以翻译为：Marry always helps her mother with the housework.
5.BC正确