UC知道帮我看看这篇英语作文有语法错误吗?最多会扣几分啊?谢谢拉
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Dear X X,
How are you ? I have an exciting news to tell you . For my May Day vacations , I will go to Qingdao with my parents by air . We will have a three-day visit .At that days,we will explore some places.Than we are going to swimming. We will go shopping,and I shall buy some gifts for my friends.I hope my visit will be funny!Can you tell me something about your May Day vacations?
Yours,
X X
How are you ? I have an exciting news to tell you . For my May Day vacations , I will go to Qingdao with my parents by air . We will have a three-day visit .At that days,we will explore some places.Than we are going to swimming. We will go shopping,and I shall buy some gifts for my friends.I hope my visit will be funny!Can you tell me something about your May Day vacations?
Yours,
X X
How are you ? I have an exciting new(s) to tell you . For my May Day vacations , I will go to Qingdao with my parents by air . We will have a three-day(-)visit .At (these) days,we will explore some places.Than we are going to swim(ming). We will go shopping,and I shall buy some gifts for my friends.I hope my visit will be funny!Can you tell me something about your May Day vacations?
Yours,
X X
括号中的需要变动
是以什么为标准判分的？
than（比） 应该为 then（然后）
funny（好笑的） 最好给为 fun（愉快的）
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