I HAVE BEEN PLAYED THE FLUTE FOR FOUR YEARS

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英语短文改错。一共九处错误。谢谢。I have been played the flute for four years.i am not sure what made me do so, maybe because my dad and his musical talent.When my dad was a little boy ,he was pushed by my grandparents to play piano.He was really a good player after eight years of practice.And now,he pushes my brother and myself to play some instruments.The flute needs a lot of practice.When i fail play a piece well,i feel very excited.Even though my mind is controlling my finger, i feel that i am listening to other person playing in a different room.i realize that i love music.i will keep playing the flute through good or bad times.

I have been to played the flute for four years.I am not sure what me made do so, maybe is because my dad and his musical talent.When my dad was a little boy ,he was pushed with my grandparents ，to play the piano.He was really a good player before eight years of practice.And now,he pushes my brother and myself to play some instruments.The flute needs a lot of practice.When i play a piece well,i feel very excited.Even though my mind is controlling my finger, i feel that i am listening to other person playing in a different room.i realize that is i love music.i will keep playing the flute through good or bad times.

这是修改后的，你自己对照吧

错误只有9处吗？整个短文都很垃圾，怎么改也不会改好，不如重写。

第一句：I have been played the flute for four years 就已经有问题。正确的说法是 I have played the flute for four years。