麻烦帮我修改下这句英文,老师说有错误,我真是看不出来了

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Table 1 shows that 84.15% (223 people) of the informants agree that travel is an edifying experience, 15.47%(41 people) think that travel is not essential, and only 0.38% (1 people) support that travel will increase the financial burden and affect their studies, which means that most of university students think travel is an important part of university life and have a mind to travel.

没错 可能最后一句容易引起歧义最好 have a mind to travel前在加上they吧

发现个比较严重的错误在最后面,think travel is这句
要么把is去掉,要么think后面加个that。