英语改错!!高分!!好的话给200!!

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传说N年以前,天上有10个太阳,天气异常炎热,有一个叫后羿的人用弓射下了9个太阳,从此世界恢复了平静.因为后羿出色的表现王母娘娘送个他一颗长生不老药~这是最早没有记载的传说
关于长生不老药最早有记载的传说在中国<<史书>>中有记载,大约在公元213年秦始皇统一了6国大兴修建宫殿~之后开始寻找长不老药,有一个叫徐福的人那时叫"方士"早期的化学家替他出海寻找,但一去不复反再也没有回来.
我认为随着科学技术的飞速发展,将会有许许多多新鲜的事物出现在我们的视野里,改变了我们的生活。我想会有薄如纸片的大屏幕高清晰电视,有会说话的电饭锅,有纽扣大小的手机,有会变颜色能调温的鞋子等东西~那长生不老药也就离我们不远了~

Legend N years ago, heaven has 10 SUNS, hot weather is abnormal, one of his people with bows down nine sun, the restored calm. Because of his excellent performance of the heavenly queen send him an elixir ~ this is the earliest record of no legend
About elixir of the earliest recorded in Chinese 《legend》 in historical records, in about A.D. there in qin shihuang unified 213 six nations built palaces - to raise for long old medicine, there is a call XuFu people then called "the alchemist" early chemist for him to find out, but never came back again.
I think with the rapid development of science and technology, there wil

Legend of N years ago, the sky the sun 10, the weather was unusually hot, there is a people called Hou Yi shot down by the bow 9 sun, then the return to calm the world. Hou Yi's remarkable performance as Queen Mother to send one of his long life old drugs ~ it is not recorded in the earliest legends
Drugs on the longevity of the legend of the first recorded in China <<history books>> There are records about the year AD 213 the emperor unified the country Daxing 6 ~ after the construction of the palace to find a long old drugs, there is a person who called was named Xu "FANG" early chemists to find out for him, but the anti-gone never returned.
I think that with the rapid development of science and technology, there will be many new things appear in our vision, the changes in our lives. I would like to be as thin as paper the large-screen high-definition television, there will be talk of rice cooker, a button-sized cell phone, there will be the c