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My favorite seasons are spring, summer, autumn, and winter. I love spring because Chris'birthday is in Spring and we can go to fabulorous concerts in the season. I love summer as the sun shines every day in summer and we can wear very simple clothes. I love autumn since the birthdays of me and Miss yang are in autumn. I love winter because it snows in winter and snow is lovely! I love every season, every month and every day. I love life!

我喜欢的季节是春、夏、秋、冬四个季节。我喜欢春天，是因为chris的生日就在春天，我们可以听到十分棒的演唱会；我喜欢夏天，是因为每天都会有太阳，我们可以穿十分简单的服饰；我喜欢秋天，是因为我和miss yang的生日就在秋天；我喜欢冬天，因为冬天会下雪，雪很lovely！我爱每一个季节，我爱每一个月，我爱每一天，我爱生活！

I like the season is spring, summer, autumn and winter in four seasons. I like spring because chris's birthday in the spring, we can hear the concert very Stick; I like summer because the sun every day, we can wear the dress is very simple; I like to fall, because I miss yang's birthday and in the autumn; I like winter because the winter snow, the snow is love